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描写我的家乡优美英文句子

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四级写作题目一:

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your hometown. What is the place would you show him or her and why?

四级写作题目二:

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your campus. What is the place would you show him or her and why?

四级写作题目三:

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your China. What is the place would you show him or her and why?

与去年的图画

对于2014年6月份外国友人来你的家乡,请给他推荐一个地方并说明原因的真题。写法趋向于说明文,介绍一个地点,其实并不难写,只是出乎意料,让大家措手不及。范文参考如下,另外两个题目外国友人来你的国家和你的校园,写法也可参照于此,把地点换掉即可。

参考范文:

If my foreign friend comes to my hometown, I will take her to the Central Avenue .When it comes to the reasons why I choose this place, they can be briefly summed up as below.

To start with, Central Avenue is a symbol of Harbin, which has a long history. There are European-style buildings in mounting numbers along the street, attracting a great many tourists to take photos with them. Moreover, a variety of delicious foods are tempting. Taking a look around, I can find examples too numerous to list. The best illustration might be ice-cream brick of Ma Dieer. Finally, brilliant historic culture can widen vision and enhance knowledge, laying a solid foundation for the understanding of this fabulous city.

Harbin is a city full of vitality and energy. I believe my foreign friend will enjoy her days here. Not only can she appreciate the landscape of the Songhua River but also taste authentic northeast food. No better place can be chosen than Central Avenue!

关于中国的范文:中国(China)

As one of the most bewitching and international cities in China, I strongly recommend you, my dearest friends, to pay a visit to my hometown-Beijing. It is the capital of China for several dynasties over a long period. In the meantime, it has now evolved into the political, cultural and educational center. There are many places of interests here in Beijing, among which the Summer Palace is the most interesting attraction.

The Summer Palace is situated in the western outskirts of Beijing, and it is one of the most classical gardens in China, which enjoys a worldwide reputation. The most alluring scenery is Kunming Lake, with an exquisite building in the middle, and it involves three parts which are mainly used as the ancient empress’s living quarter.

I’m sure you can definitely experience the characteristic and traditional culture of China. Hope you could enjoy your trip!

关于家乡的范文:桂林(Guilin – A Beautiful City in China)

In China, there's a saying that "The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven." In light of this, I will recommend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China.

Overlooking the Li Jiang River, Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi. The name was derived from the cassia trees of the location. The trees line the streets of the town with yellow flowers blossoming every September, filling the air with sweet scent.

Guilin is a place of breath-taking scenery. From ancient times, Guilin has been noted for its elegant landscape. It features beautiful mountains, clear rivers, grotesque rocks and mystic crags, which is a feast for the eyes. Sitting on a bamboo raft drifting down the river, visitors can see the varied shapes of the pinnacles reflected in the water. They will feel as if they were in a scroll of Chinese landscape painting.

I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the unparalleled beauty of Guilin.

关于家乡的范文:豫园(Yu Garden)

If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown, Shanghai, I would like to take her to Yu Garden.

Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese garden located beside the City God Temple in the northeast of Shanghai. Here she will marvel at the exotic and exquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden. She can walk on the crooked bridge and take photos of the beautiful goldfish. Besides, she can taste the local cuisines like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk. There are a variety of mouth-watering snacks there. Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious food, she will also be attracted by the remarkable performance of different craftsmen. For example, she will see Shanghai-style paper-cutting, and the process of making Chinese candy and clay figurines.

I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden. This is a place where the features of this city are combined.

3、In autumn of the south wind came new wheat aroma and wormwood breath.夏末秋初的南风刮来了新麦子的香气和蒿草的气息。 4、In summer, the drizzle, highland barley seedling "to drink the rain, the grass be riotous with colour of flowers blooming.夏天里,细雨蒙蒙,青稞苗“咕咚咕咚”地喝着雨水,草地上开满了五颜六色的野花。 5、It was terribly hot, not a breath of wind thick air like froze.天气闷热得要命,一丝风也没有稠乎乎的空气好像凝住了。

6、It was terribly hot, not a breath of wind, like the thick air froze.天气闷热得要命,一丝风也没有,稠乎乎的空气好像凝住了。 7、One summer night, the stars in the sky shining, the breeze dispelled the daytime heat, the earth was quiet.夏天的一个晚上,天上星星闪烁,一阵阵凉风驱散了白天的余热,大地一片寂静。 8、Summer breeze, with Chinese date and the rose flower fragrance, floating into the simple and comfortable living room.初夏的晚风,带着枣花和月季花的幽香,飘进这间简朴而舒适的客厅。

篇一:我的英文写作的

一、英语写作的特点.

The characteristics of formal writing

1.名词化趋势

I do not eat much.-->I am a light eater.

The clock on the desk reminds me of time.-->I put a clock on the desk as a reminder of time.

We once cried, laughed and disappointed.-->There were moments of tears, moments of laughter, and moments of disappointment.

注意:名词化趋势的句子当然还有动词, 目的是尽量把表达句子中心意思的那个词汇用名词表达.符合英文的习惯.

2.无灵主语(区别于被动语态)

我们中文写作中,习惯以人做主语,而英文则相反,习惯以物做主格.

More and more young students studied further in the past two decades.

-->The past two decades witnessed a growing number of young students for further study.

Looking out of the window, you will have a nice view.

-->A glance out of the window offers you a nice view.

注意: 名词化趋势和无灵主语常常是相结合的.

3.被动语态

这一点大家比较熟悉,不详细讲.比如:

Great efforts should be made to…..

What can not be denied is that….

二、句式的写作:

Main features of English sentences:

1.长短句结合

Love is patient and kind. It is never jealous, boastful, proud or rude. It keeps no record of wrong that others do. It always protects, always fruits, always hopes, and always perseveres. Love never fails.

一般来讲,总结性的句子应当使用短句,而说理的句子应用长句.

2.并列复合句

这种句子属于十分难写的句子,也举一个例子:

He who wants to save his life will lose it, and he who loses his life for me will save it.

3.单一复合句

也就是我们常说的各种从句,不再举例.

三、Variety of sentences:

1. ”-ing & -ed” groups

(1)Standing by the riverside, the Master sighed,” May time go on and on like this, never ceasing day and night.”

(2)Reviewing what one has learned and gaining new insights, one is fit to be a teacher.

(3)Compared with the tradition, modernity is more dynamic.

2. ”to do” groups

To spend too much time in study is sloth; to use them too much for ornaments is affectation; to make any judgment wholly by their rules is the humor of the scholar.

3. adverb

Simply, amazingly, absurdly, broadly, practically and so on

Intelligently applied to daily life, modern technology will surely bring benefits to the well-being of the human race.

4.介词短语

In pursuit of, in spite of (注意平时自己的收集)

In pursuit of excellence, ever pushing up the limit, life consists in the hope born of despair.

5.主语从句

What China needs is not more morals, but more prisons for politicians.

句子的变化还有 It is self-evident(adj) that…….和There be 这样的句子

6.倒装

(1)将一些否定性含义的副词和短语在句首,用倒装会使句子生色不少.

Never before has such a high standard been achieved.

Hardly had he arrived when she started complaining.

(2)为使描绘更加生动,与介词同形的副词可以移动到句首,而把主语放到谓语后面去.

Following the roar, out rushed a tiger from the bushes.

In came a pretty girl he had never seen before.

四、插入语

插入语可以是一个小词,也可以是一个同谓语的形式.

1.先看一个小技巧:(对there be 句型均有效)

There is, recently, a debate amongst educators that……

通俗的讲,在老外眼里,主语与谓语离的越远,句子的档次越高.

2.插入语后面再接上一个定语从句;

Direct experience, a necessary means to recognize the world, which differs from knowledge acquired from books, is a major step to the cognitive world.

再看几个同谓语从句的例子:

1.Television, one of the most pervasive and persuasive technologies, marked by the rapid growth and drastic change, has a profound impact on people’s lives.

2.Courage, a basic quality that every human being is supposed to possess when facing a dilemma, is highly cherished among young people.

3. Convention, generally accepted practice especially with regard to social behavior, has now been increasingly challenged.

平时要多积累这样的句型,使之变成自己的语言.

Tip:对同谓语的解释尽量宽泛一些,有利于句子的拉长.

对于入语加定语从句开头.

就是说:将题目中的中心词拿出来,进行宽泛的解释.

这一方法对很大一部分的考题都是有效的.

以上就是我的一点总结,希望对大家会有所帮助.

篇二:初二 英语

Our Future

Nobody know what will happen in the future. And predicting the future is difficult.

In the future I think people will have robots in their homes. There are already robots working in factories. And new robots will have many different shaps. People won’t usu money. Everything will be free. Many people will keep many different pets, like snakes or spiders .Kids won’t go to school they will study at home on computer. Books will only be on computers.,not on paper.There will be more computers and more free time. And people will live to be 200 years. In the world,there will be more people and more cars. Maybe there will be less pollution and more tress.The world will be more beautiful.

Our Future

In ten years., people will have robots in their homes. And people won’t use money, everything will be free. Books will only be on computers, not on paper. Kids won’t go to school. They will studying at home on computers. I think there will only be one country. People will live to be 200 years old There will be more people. There will be more free time. And there will be more tress. And there will be more cars. There will be less pollution There will be more tress. And cities will be very big and clean

Our Future

In the future, maybe we’ll be an actor、a doctor、a singer or anther else. So we’ll be able to make a living doing something we love. We’ll live in busy and beautiful city such as Shanghai Beijing and Hangzhou. And I’ll live in Shanghai. Because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.

Probably we’ll live in an apartment or a building with our parents.If we like pets, we’ll have many different pets, such as rabbits, parrots and dogs. Pets need a lot of love. So we’ll spend a lot of some time with them.

Maybe we’ll travel all over the world. Especially at English-speaking countries such as the United States and Australia, so we’ll be able to improve our English. Predicting the future can be different. But I believe our dream will come true.

Trust self! Where there is a will there is a way!

Our Future

What our life will be like in the future

I think the life of mine will be more modern than now. Every family will have robots. The robots will help us do all the housework. The food will be more healthy. We will have a personal computer. We will be able to do some shopping. The little children won’t go to school . They’ll study at home on computers. People might fly to the moon for holidays.

How wonderful our future will be! I hope my dreams will come true.

Our Future

In the future, we’ll grow up. We will have the different jobs. We’ll be a friendly teacher, an excellent、reporter、a good policeman、a popular singer and so on. Perhaps we’ll work in the companies. But we won’t too tired. Because there will be robots everywhere. Robots will work in the factories. So we will be free sometimes we will have a wonderful time every day. We can go swimming with friends every day. We can also go shopping with friends. We won’t us parper money. We can go to France to take a vacation. We can go to place where we want to go we

will have own computer. We can work on computers.

Work hard, we have to study hard now.

Let’s together!

In The Future

In the future, the world will be more beautiful there will be fewer cars, and there will be less pollution. Cities will be very big and clean. There will be more trees.

People will have robots in their homes. Robots can help people do lots of housework, for example, do the dishes,wash the clothes,cook dinner… And people won’t use money, because everything will be free. Student won’t go to school , the studying at home on computers. People will have a lot of free time.

I think the life will be beautiful in the future. How about you

Our Future

Predicting the future can be difficult. But I think our future will be better than now.

If we plant more tress, the environment will be better There will be less pollution.

Our lives will be better, We will be able to eat healthy food. We will live in big apartments. There will be more robots. They will help people to do lots of simple work. The people will have more free time.

I hope our future can be better.

Our Future

In the future, I think the world will changed a lot.

I think kids won’t go to school, they will study at home on computers.Book will only be on computers, not on paper. People will be more free time. Because robots will help our do something people will have robots in their homes.

I think there will be many tall buildings and wide streets in my hometown. There will be more tress and flowers everywhere. Perhaps many robots will work in factory. There will be less pollution. I think my hometown will become more and more beautiful.

Our Future

Our future will be wonderful. People will have robots in their homes. Kids won’t go to school. They’ll study at home on computers. People won’t use money, everything will be free. There will be more free time. There will be less pollution. There will be more tress. In ten years, we will live in sea. I think there will be more tall buildings. There will be fewer cars and more buses. Maybe one day people will fly to the moon for vacations. My life will be a lot better than this now.  Our Future

I think our future will be more beautiful. Do you thinkLet’s talk about our future.

Everyone has their dreams. In the future. I think they will come true. However “no cross, no crown.” We must hard-working now. In the future, I think wo will be a teacher, a doctor, an athlete, a lawyer and so on.

We will have robots in our homes in the future. They help with the housework and do the most unpleasant jobs. And we will work with robots. In the future. Everyone will be friendly. And wo won’t use money. Everything will be free.

“Health is happiness.” So in the future.Everyone will be in good health.

We never know what will happen in the future do weBut I believe the future will be beautiful.  Our Future

In the future. I think our world will be more beautiful than now. We will have robots help us to do something.They can do simple jobs over and over again.These robots will look more like human.

In the future I think everything will be free.We will study at home on computers. There will be less pollution and the environment will be better than now.

Predicting the future can be difficult, but I believe our dream will come true in the future.  Our Future

We are students now. But we both have ourselves dreams. For example.I want to be a reporter. Because if I became a reporter. I can make a lot of money and. I also can meet lots of interesting people.So I should study Chinese well.My friend-Ann wants to be a singer. Because she thinks it;s a really interesting job.And she wants to be a flight attendant. She should study English well.

We have different dreams. So we believe our future will be happy. And our dreams can be come true.

Our Future

In the future people will have robots in their homes.These robots are just like humans.They help with the house work and do the most unpleasant jobs.

For example there are already robots working in factories.These robots look more like huge arms.The do simple jobs over and over again.People would not like to do such job and would get board.But robots will never get board.

篇三:我的家乡英语作文

英语作文 我的家乡

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.

But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.

I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

英语作文 我的家乡

I am from ShenZhen. In spring ,the weather is warm and wet. I can play kite. In summer, the weather is hot and wet. I can swim in the swimming pool. In the autumn, the weather is cool and dry. I can play kite, too. In the winter, the weather is cold and dry. It never snow.

英语作文 我的家乡

写一个《我的家乡》英语作文60词

Welcome to my hometown! Shanghai is my hometown. It is a modern and busy

town. It has a long history. There are many big supermarkets, beautiful gardens and good factories here. It is very easy to go shopping. You can see big trees and nice flowers. There are many restaurants in Shanghai. The food tastes very delicious.You can enjoy eyery minutes of it. Many visitors come here to enjoy it.

篇四:我的写的英语作文

The international HuanBaoRiToday is The international Huanbaori, We will going to use plants and waste items decorate our classroom. Teacher siad:“Who’s home has plant?” And we are all from home to bring the plant .  First we get a tree,and than,we get some shoes and bells,and we put them on the tree. And we put some flowers and some trees in the classroom . And teacher sida:“It wery beautiful, I like it wery much!”

At the beach Today is holiday, my parent and my frend went to the beach. At the beach,we want to make the statue.

Firth,we use the sand to make a mouse statue,and we put the shell on it.But

suddenly the high tide,the mouse’s mouth is rotten I think it can be a frog,so we make a frog. Our parent all side:“It is very beautiful,we all like it!”We all have a good time!

In the Veterinary

hospital Today , I and my pet went to the veterinary hospital . In the veterinary hospital,my cat see a dog! It is very afraid of dog. The dog went to bite it, and my cat want to go back home!

20 minutes later,my cat and I went in the room,and 10 minutes later,we go back home and sleep!

My father

My foot sprain , yesterday . Today is rain,I can walk, in morning dad came back home . He give my the letters , and ger my the breakfast. One month later, My feet are good ,and I can walk again,but dad is very tired. This is my father.

篇五:英语作文介绍我们的学校

Welcome to our school! Our school is the key middle school in this city. Now we are in the front gate. Entry in this school, you can see there is a big football playground on the left and a big resturant on the right. If you’re hungry, you can have something good in there. The grand teaching building is right behind the football playground. We spend most time in the classrooms. Behind the teaching building, there is a little lake with many fish in it. Oh, there is also a nice library next to the lake. After the class, we can entry the library freely to read the books we like. This is our school. Don’t you think it’s great

欢迎来到我们学校! 我们中学是这所城市的重点中学。现在我们来到了学校的正大门。进入到这所学校,你可以看到在校园的左边有个很大的足球场,右边有个很大的'餐厅。如果你饿了,你可以去餐厅吃些好吃的东西。巨大的教学楼就在足球场后面。我们的大多数时间都待在教室里。在教学楼后面,有个小小的湖泊,很多鱼在水里游。噢,对了,小湖泊的旁边还有个图书馆。下课的时候,我们可以进去读自己喜欢的书籍。这就是我们的学校。你不认为这很棒吗

篇六:我总结的英语作文

英语作文总结

高中英语作文的类型

1要求对两个对立的观点给出自己的看法

(1) 引出主题

1There heated discussion/ debate about whether --------观点

(2)some people  Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③------理由二). Moreover, ④------(理由三).

3While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------理由三).

(3) In my opinion / as for me ,

From what I have said ,I agree to the thought ------我的观点

小结:虽然这只是一类作文,但是其实里面的句子在写作文中可以互用的

阐述主题题型

要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.

1.  阐述

2.  分析并举例使其更充实.

The good old proverb ------(名言或谚语)reminds us that ------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.

First of all,------(理由一). For example, ------(举例说明).

Secondly,------(理由二). Another case is that ------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------(理由三).

In my opinion, ------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please

remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it./ only if do as the proverb say ,can we -----

最后一句话,可以适用于很多作文的最后一句。

英语写作常用句型(一)段首句

1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some

people suggest that ____.

2. 俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,  它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our

forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even

3. 现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;  其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily

life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is

that______.

4. 现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)  ……。

Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______  because ______. Besides,______.

5. 任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不  利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it

has both advantages and disadvantages.

6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看  来,……

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.

Some people say that ______.To them,_____.

7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming

more and more serious.

8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈  的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people,especially

among the young and heated debates are right on their way.

9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许  多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

______ has been playing an increasingly important role in

our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of

benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可  以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢?

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in

the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______

while. Obviously,______,but why

(二)中间段落句

1. 相反,有一些人赞成……,他们相信……,而且,他们认为……。

On the contrary,there are some people in favor of ___.At

the same time,they say____.

2. 但是,我认为这不是解决……的好方法,比如……。最糟糕的  是……。

But I dont think it is a very good way to solve ____.For

example,____.Worst of all,___.

3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的,(也是)非常重要的。  首先,……。而且……,最重要的是……

______is necessary and important to our countrys

development and construction. First,______.Whats

more, _____.Most important of all,______.

4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先,我们可以……。

There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we

can______

5. 面临……,我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方  面……,另一方面,

Confronted with______,we should take a series of effective

measures to______. For one thing,______For another,______

6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……,另外……。所有这些方法肯定  会……。

It is high time that something was done about it. For

example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures

will certainly______.

7. 为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因  是……。总的来说,……的主要原因是由于……

Why______The first reason is that ______.The second

reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the

main cause of ______due to ______.

8. 然而,正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样,……也有它的不利的一面,象……。

However, just like everything has both its good and bad

sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as

______.

9. 尽管如此,我相信……更有利。

Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous

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篇七:写好英语作文之我见

摘要:英语写作在高考命题中对学生是相对较难的部分,有的学生对此弱项抱舍弃态度。要解决这一难题,应让学生在平日的学习中打好扎实的基本功,掌握一定的写作技巧,并要坚持大量的写作练习。有效地利用这几种方式,定能促进学生写作能力的形成。关键词:学法、英语、高中  英语写作在高考命题中对学生是相对较难的部分,他考察考生综合运用语言的能力。试题要求考生根据所给情景和要求写一篇书面材料。但他并非要求考生按照“提示”逐句翻译,而是要求考生在充分领会提示的“前提”下,用自己的语言,组织成一片内容充实、句子连贯、用词贴切的作文。那么高中生如何培养自己的写作能力?在高考中如何能得心应手地写出篇好作文呢?我觉得首先要解决好以下这三个问题。 一、打好扎实的基本功 第一、首先要调动学生主动学习的积极性。有的学生对此弱项报舍弃态度,情愿把精力放在其他方面,也不愿花过多的时间和精力来提高自己的写作能力。所以要先教书育人,把外语学习与理想和目标教育联系起来教育学生,使他们充分认识到学好外语是时代的要求,是培养跨世纪人才的需要。只有学好外语,才能更好地运用这一交际工具为祖国现代化服务,从而树立为国、为民而学的远大理想和奋斗目标,使学生产生持久的动力, 保持长久的、旺盛的精力。这样才能提高学生的学习兴趣和积极性,推动语言运用能力的持续提高。 第二、要加强词汇、语法、句型教学及操练。要打好语言能力基础,词汇量是写作的基本建筑材料之一。得心应手地遣词造句,对于表达文章的思想内容和风格特点具有重要的作用。词汇量不足或掌握得不好,都会给写作带来困难。因而,在进行词汇教学时,教师不仅要教足词汇量,还要讲清楚每个词的每个意义的使用条件、用法及搭配关系,进行典型同义词、近义词比较,点出构词法等。在通过例句说明的同时,让学生模仿造句,使学生真正掌握其用法及语义特点。学生只有在较好地掌握了充足词汇量的基础上,写作时才能做到随心所欲地选择适合文章主体和风格的词、意义确切的词、表.达清晰和生动的词、形象具体的词,以及符合英语惯用法的词,以达到较好的表达效果。另外,语法规则与句型,是英语写作必备的另一种重要建筑材料。学生在初、高中已经学过基本语法知识与句型,由于缺乏操练,并没有很好地掌握。因此,在教学实践中,还必须加强基础语法与句型的训练,同时注重汉译英与造句练习。句子是作文的基本单位,一个句子表达一个完整的思想。成功的作文是由清晰的、合乎语法规则的句子组成的。所以,加强词汇教学,注重语法与句型操练,打好句子基础,是提高写作水平的重要环节。[!--empirenews.page--] 第三、努力创造课内外的语言环境,学生的各项语言技能是相互依存、相互促进的。教师在课堂上组织教学的过程就是与学生交际的过程。教师在教学实践过程中,应以学生为中心,尽量多给学生提供机会和情景。让他们进行模仿、回答、复述等,以促进他们写作能力的形成。 组织课外活动小组,是弥补课内操练时间不足的有效办法,开展活动时,可联系自己的生活实际,叙述自己的思想及课文学习后的

认真审题立意,确定写作中心。找出根据这个中心能够扩展的材料有哪些。要避免写那些与中心内容无关紧要的细节。以命题作文“The Teacher I Admire Most”为例,文章的主题是关于记叙我最欣赏的一位老师,因而就不能泛泛谈论老师这一职业或自己的几位老师。` 其次,围绕中心,列出写作提纲。提纲一定要包含所提供的情景、要点,同时要尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇与句型。仍以“The Teacher I Admire Most”为例。提纲可以这样写:1)Who is the teacher I admire most2)My reasons. 3)What can I learn from the teacher. 第三,根据字数多少,扩展成篇。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题,千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。扩展时要注意短文地字数,以避免由于字数不够引起的扣分 在写的过程中也有些窍门,以下几点可供参考。 1、在整篇文章中,避免只是用一、两个句式。要灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等。 2、使用不同长度的句子,通过分句和合句,增强句子地连贯性和表现力。 3、改变句子的开头方式,不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语至于句首,或用分词等。 4、学会使用过渡词。 如:1)递进 furthermore, moreover, besides, in addition, then,etc 2)转折 however, but, nevertheless, afterwards,etc 3)总结 finally, at last, in brief, to conclude, etc 4)强调 really, indeed, certainly, surely, above all, etc 5)对比in the same way, just as,on the other hand,etc[!--empirenews.page--] 5、避免重复使用同一单词或词组。

6、确定文章用第几人称写,基本时态是什么。 三、坚持大量的写作实践  写作能力必须通过长期的、大量的反复实践才能获得。如果实践不够,即使学生完全掌握了课堂上所学的语言知识,也懂得了一定的写作技巧,一旦使用语言时,也难免开口结结巴巴,下笔力不从心。 总之,写作能力的培养和提高,有赖于扎实的基础、写作方法和大量的写作实践。只要我们从这点出发,充分调动学生的学习积极性,以学生为中心,创造良好的课内外语言环境,定能有效地促进学生写作能力的形成,改变目前学生写作能力弱的现状,在写作方面,推动外语教学再上新台阶。

篇八:我的老师(英语作文)

My Teacher

My English teather is Mr Xu, his English name is Martin. His English is very good. And he always wears a pair of glasses. He likes wearing blue trousers. My teacher is handsome. He often plays with us after class. He often reads books and English. His hobby is reading books. Mr Xu likes drinking Coke and eating chips. Sometimes he is angry, because we are naughty. Sometimes he is happy, because we are good.

Our art teacher is not too old and not too young. He’s tall and strong. He has a big mouth and small ears. He likes wearing a hat. He is good at drawing. He’s very funny. We all like him.

My new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes。

My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart, isn’t heToday, we have

science class. We are very happy. Because he is so funny. Who is heHe’s a Mr. Zhou .

My English teacher

I have a very good English teacher. Our class all like her very much. Though she’s our English teacher, but we often call her name Holly.  She is very friendly to us. We all like to have English classes very much.

She is so young and beautiful. She looks like a middle school student. She has two big eyes and long hair. She likes wearing T-shirts and jeans.

She teaches English very well. In class, she looks like our elder sister. We usually learn new things by playing games and singing songs ,so we always have fun in English class. She often helps us to solve problems. After class, she looks like our friend. We often play games together.

Now , you see , do you like our English teacher too

My favourite teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little red mouth. There is always a smile on her face.

Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.

Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.

This is my favourite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.

译文:

我最喜欢的老师是黄老师。她是一位漂亮的女性。她有两只大大的眼睛,一个高高的鼻子和一张小小的红唇。她的脸上总带着笑容。

黄老师喜欢唱歌和收集海报。她钢琴弹得很好。晚上,她常常坐在钢琴前弹奏优美的乐曲。黄老师跳舞也很棒。有时她也会教我们跳舞。

黄老师非常喜欢狗,因为狗很友好也很可爱。黄老师最喜欢的颜色是蓝色,因为蓝色是天空和海的颜色。

这就是我喜欢的老师。我们班的同学都非常喜欢她。

Hello! I’m Jessie. I like English very much, because of my English teacher, Nettie. Today, I’ll introduce her to you.

In my eyes, she’s not a teacher, but a lovely girl and a good friend of mine. She is not tall. She is thin. She has the long hair. Her face is round. There are two small eyes on her face. She likes smiling. When she smiles, her eyes just like the moon at the beginning of the month. I think she is very beautiful girl.

She’s very kind, like an old friend. She can sing. She can draw. She can dance. She can speak very good English. She can tell us stories. She can play games with us. When we have an English lesson, we feel very happy. All of us are interested in her lesson.

I have a good teacher. I think I’m very lucky.